Respuesta :
Answer:
Sentence-level Writing
a. Dangling Modifier:
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1.
Dangling Modifier: Â When beginning the meeting
Best Revision: Â 2. When we were beginning the meeting, the fire alarm went off
2.
Dangling Modifier : Â taking the train into Boston
Best Revision: Taking the train into Boston, Katie reviewed the meeting minutes.
b. Identifying the dependent clauses:
1. Unless he responds to my request in the next 24 hours
3. When he opened the e-mail message
c. Identifying the independent clauses:
2. Meanwhile, the executive assistant printed the agenda.
d. Identifying the sentence with the correct parallel structure:
1. The systems analyst found that we needed to upgrade our equipment, revise our backup process, and implement better security measures.
e. Best option to complete the sentence:
If you _________, you will do well in this corporation.
1. write well, speak well, and use good interpersonal skills
Explanation:
a. A phrase or clause that is not directly related to the word or words it modifies is called a dangling modifier. Â Usually, the word a dangling modifier modifies may be absent from the sentence. Â An example is "when beginning the meeting." Â The word it modifies may be "we" as in "When we were beginning the meeting, the fire alarm went off."
b. A clause which cannot make a complete sense or sentence is called a dependent clause. Â It requires another clause to make a complete sense. Â The clause that makes a complete a complete sentence and can stand alone without another clause is an independent clause.
c. A sentence that has grammatical structure which is balanced is said to have parallelism. Â This can also be called parallel structure or construction. Â This means that the items listed follow similar pattern that rhyme with one another. Â Let us revise the sentence with the wrong parallel structure in this case so as to make it become a parallelism: Â "The systems analyst found that we needed upgraded equipment, revised backup processes, and better implemented security measures." Â By this revision, the wrong parallel sentence now has a well-structured parallelism.